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This was a really interesting and well-written piece. I love how it transitions from the cosmic horror of the unknowable to something more optimisitc and sublime with the surviving crew choosing to live on as part of the alien 'celestial body'. There are also some really wonderful turns of phrase here ("whispery rasps leak out of his throat in strange, staccato spurts" hooked me from the first chapter). The structure of alternating between the Captain's personal and more emotional logs and the more detached commentary from mission control was a clever touch. Not only did it help deepen the mystery, it also demonstrated how the same cataclysmic events can be understood radically differently by those experiencing them and the system that ultimately has to metabolise and comprehend their meaning. In places, it felt like an episode of Star Trek written by H.P. Lovecraft (which I mean as a compliment, of course), but by the end, it emerged as something totally and uniquely your own.

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

But what of the Eradinus? Did they end up opting for the same fate? Did they arrive too early and the Hermod wasn’t expelled yet? Curious!

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