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Time Is A Ghost's avatar

This is absolutely brilliant, Gregory!! The tension of an author being physically confronted by their own 'lazy writing' is brilliant, but it’s that final sting of existential guilt that really lingers. It leaves you looking at your own drafts wondering which of your forgotten characters is waiting in the dark for a rewrite. Absolutely stellar work.

Gregory Blair's avatar

Thank you so much, Lauren!

James (HVR)'s avatar

Aahahahahaahhah! I love it. The characterization was offensive or bland! This English teacher gives it an A!

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was great. Had me gripped the whole way.

Gregory Blair's avatar

Thank you, Gary!

Hallie Jules's avatar

Love this!