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Mac Sitko's avatar

Classic horror vibes done proper.

Gregory Blair's avatar

Wow! Thank you so much. Mac! That really made me smile! 🥰

Jacinta: One Page at a Time's avatar

So it's established - in Scooby-Doo terms they are the 'pesky kids' walking unwittingly into danger.

I'm enjoying this interlude of normality with a hint of foreshadowing before it gets more creepy/scary.

Liked this bit: 'His fuck-you-if-you-don’t-like-me attitude hung, unspoken about him like an odd, odorless cologne; you couldn’t smell it, but it affected you, nevertheless.'

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

Nice rag-tag (dare I say “brat pack”) group here. Excited to see what happens to them! 👀👀

Gregory Blair's avatar

Thank you! Hold onto your proverbial hat… 😁

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I'm enjoying these characters and slightly nervous for them in the next chapter. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out!

Gregory Blair's avatar

Thank you, Kimberly! 😊