This is satisfyingly good! Power dynamics, weird science, bullies getting their comeuppance… it’s like you wrote this just for me. Great story, Gregory!
SUPER DOPEEE!!! Loved the bits of dark comedy embedded in here. Super compelling! Definitely wanted to see him succeed. Super thrown off by him literally lunging at him lol.
Damn, Gregory! This is wild in the best way. A relatable start, a fast-paced middle, and satisfying end. I'm just sorry we didn't get to hear you read this out loud today.
This is satisfyingly good! Power dynamics, weird science, bullies getting their comeuppance… it’s like you wrote this just for me. Great story, Gregory!
Oh the sensory details are wonderful. Being able to breathe, through your nose. We've all been there!
Did not see that ending though. 🙌❤️🙌
If the only side effects is a little bit of cannibalism, then sign me up!
I enjoyed this, so much. The undercurrent of fun highlighted the horror perfectly 🖤
Thank you, Ariadne!
It’s like a twisted superhero origin story. I’m glad Donnie got his. Great read!
Thank you, Aaron!
SUPER DOPEEE!!! Loved the bits of dark comedy embedded in here. Super compelling! Definitely wanted to see him succeed. Super thrown off by him literally lunging at him lol.
Damn, Gregory! This is wild in the best way. A relatable start, a fast-paced middle, and satisfying end. I'm just sorry we didn't get to hear you read this out loud today.
Thank you, Garen! I know…I’m so bummed! I don’t know why it didn’t work. I appreciate you and Erica making the reading a marvelous event, regardless!
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So cool and original. Love it
Oh, I was also going to say that I was sad that you didn't get to read live today.
Nice. Love the narrative voice. And bullies getting their due.
Yay! I’ll root for this monster any day! This is vindication for every allergy sufferer. 🎉🙌
Right? This story is based in truth to a certain degree.
🫢 ay dios mio!
Lol! Not the ending! 😂