A tiny tale of family drama.
We wonder how long Denise had been thinking about this...
I thought it was going to be werewolves at the beginning! Great little piece!
Well, I was, of course, hoping that opening phrase’s typical familiarity would lead people to jump to the more common conclusion as to what it referred, but I am not surprised—with your affection for the horror genre—that you’d go where you went.
Glad the story still worked for you! 😊
I was certainly torn! But I had my suspicions (based on how much horror I consume) that it was a red herring! Well done!
What begins as social discomfort ends as a decisive act of protection, framed by moonlight and long-suppressed truth.
Thanks for reading! 😊
Good one!
Typo: “just” twice in line 3
Thanks! Yeah…I wrote that line a few different ways and guess I flubbed the final edit. Or maybe I just really just meant it! 😂
“There’s no justice—there’s just us.”
We wonder how long Denise had been thinking about this...
I thought it was going to be werewolves at the beginning! Great little piece!
Well, I was, of course, hoping that opening phrase’s typical familiarity would lead people to jump to the more common conclusion as to what it referred, but I am not surprised—with your affection for the horror genre—that you’d go where you went.
Glad the story still worked for you! 😊
I was certainly torn! But I had my suspicions (based on how much horror I consume) that it was a red herring! Well done!
What begins as social discomfort ends as a decisive act of protection, framed by moonlight and long-suppressed truth.
Thanks for reading! 😊
Good one!
Typo: “just” twice in line 3
Thanks! Yeah…I wrote that line a few different ways and guess I flubbed the final edit. Or maybe I just really just meant it! 😂
“There’s no justice—there’s just us.”